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Suburban Monotony by =IcecoldeEagle07:iconIcecoldeEagle07:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Humor > Open


Click Click Click
Nothing is on…
Click Click Click
ESPN.  Nope.
Flashing lights… pretty…
Click
CLICK
CLICK!!!
Maybe something on Tevo.
NO???
Wow… what has this world come to?
300+ channels and NOTHING?
Click click click some more…
NOTHING!
Wow…
I’m bored outta my mind.
Maybe I’ll text someone…
That girl at school?
My friend?
Why is no one answering me?
Type Type Type
BANG! My phone hits the wall!
Maybe that wasn’t such a good idea…
I know!
I’ll go rent a movie…
Gas, Brake, Gas, Brake…
Turn off the engine.
Open the door.
Go in the store.
Nothing good here.
Seen all that old stuff.
I own that one.
Wow…
Is there seriously nothing to do?
I’m bored.
I drive home.
Radio is BLASTING!
I LOVE this song!
Pulling into my driveway…
Open my front door…
Go down the hallway…
Step
Step
Step
SURPRISE!!!
People jump out from behind the couch.
Happy Birthday BOB!!!
My name IS NOT Bob…
And today isn’t my birthday…
Opps I came into the wrong house.
©2009 =IcecoldeEagle07
:iconicecoldeeagle07:

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Some thing I did late at night when I was extremely bored, I think it was funny... you tell me what you think...

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:iconyinying12:
~Yinying12 Mar 6, 2009, 10:28:02 AM
Hahahahaha You sound like your bored out of your mind!! Thats awesome!
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~thesearemembers Mar 6, 2009, 10:31:14 AM
That's definitely something different

--
Every man dies, not every man truly lives - Braveheart

Credit to =arkaya for my avitar
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=IcecoldeEagle07 Mar 6, 2009, 10:31:22 AM
haha thanks! :D I wasnt quite as bored as the person in the poem sounds but thanks! :D I love how this turned out myself. :D Glad you like it!
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=IcecoldeEagle07 Mar 6, 2009, 10:32:20 AM
:D Thanks! :) Did you like it?
:iconyinying12:
~Yinying12 Mar 6, 2009, 10:32:29 AM
Yeah! Its great! ^_^ Looks like something I
d read when bored then say something like.. well at least I'm not as bored as that guy.
:iconicecoldeeagle07:
=IcecoldeEagle07 Mar 6, 2009, 10:33:27 AM
haha yah... the other purpose I had in it was to be like that is how confusing the suburbs are or something... haha... Glad you like it!
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~thesearemembers Mar 6, 2009, 10:34:46 AM
Hot dam but you're fast!! I thought it was good as abstract and I figure I'll put it into the collection for the next round (I'm thinking of doing the feature every two weeks b/c a month is just too LONG) for the poetry. I've got a lot of open poetry and there was another entry that kind of reminds me of this. Maybe I could put the two of you in at the same time...

--
Every man dies, not every man truly lives - Braveheart

Credit to =arkaya for my avitar
:iconicecoldeeagle07:
=IcecoldeEagle07 Mar 6, 2009, 10:36:25 AM
What you mean I'm fast? and that sounds good to me... :D
:iconthesearemembers:
~thesearemembers Mar 6, 2009, 10:39:30 AM
Fast reply :sprint:

--
Every man dies, not every man truly lives - Braveheart

Credit to =arkaya for my avitar
:iconicecoldeeagle07:
=IcecoldeEagle07 Mar 6, 2009, 10:40:25 AM
oh okay! that is what i thought but wasnt too sure! :D Well that is just how I roll! :)
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